Talk:Claymore Manga Chapter 51

Hi User:DracoV13,thanks for the editing help. I like wiki's because mistakes are not permanent and often you don't even have to fix them yourself.

I am writing because you replace "asks" with "notices". I took a while choosing the first word. While maybe not the perfect choice, I believe it conveys the action better that the second which is too passive to describe Miria's command to Flora to draw her sword. In doing that she is asking or commanding the intervention of her second in command. Since it is Miria "asks" or "requests" is better than "command" or "orders". Ah. No I'm wrong. "Orders" is exactly the word I am looking for. So I am going to change that one word.

Again, thanks for you help and I hope you will continue as I post more synopses. --Rej 00:56, July 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hi, Rej. I was wondering. When you do your synopses, are they based off the English print version or the online translated version? I want to buy the English volumes, but so far have only read the online translated version. In the online version, Miria did not "order" Flora to draw her sword. There was just an exclamation mark, so I put "notice". Did Miria order Flora in the English version? I just want to get rid of any confusion. I really appreciate your work. Thx. DracoV13 DracoV13 18:34, July 25, 2010 (UTC)